critique my chinese painting?

I did this painting with ink and also the calligraphy. lemme know what you think.

http://a7.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/301346_2180517385629_1027751511_32541735_298649036_n.jpg

I know chinese >_< I study it at university. Its cursive style. Quite hard to read I guess if you’re unfamiliar.

The herons are really beautiful. The characters however could use some work (I know Chinese personally). Overall, I think you would get an A- work.

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6 Responses to “critique my chinese painting?”

  1. the_unluckiest says:

    The herons are beautifully drawn, but do you honestly know Chinese? Because your characters just seem like scribbling.
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  2. Sinoma Sh says:

    Pity!the link can not be found.Update the new link,please.

    More chinese paintings on http://www.1paintings.com. Have nice day!
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  3. David says:

    ace!
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  4. azmanblues says:

    I must say that you have done a splendid job with the characters and the birds. The layout is well thought out, and the white spaces are neatly used. A bit more hint of water would be welcomed; not too much, maybe a few ripples to make it more surreal…

    On the downside, I find the scene a little bit too structured. The columns of characters could be closer together, and the bird in flight a tad smaller in perspective, to allow deeper focus on the message flowing forth from the other bird.

    Overall…Well done! Not bad by a non-Chinese!
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  5. Croco says:

    I’d say that it’s an amazing painting! I love the way you used the ink :D
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  6. Ben says:

    The herons are really beautiful. The characters however could use some work (I know Chinese personally). Overall, I think you would get an A- work.
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